Now with the revisions done with the first chapter, I’m happy to say progress has been made to fix what I thought was the most poorly written of the chapters as it had the worst dialogue,being Chapter 2: Hope. Which breaks my heart for the fact that it had some much other details and plot points that contribute to the rest of the story. This was the debut of one of the most chaotic of the characters within the Realm of Tachyon, the mighty Elder of Knowledge himself, Sulfern! I hope you guys are liking this remodel of these early chapters like I am. Thanks for the support as always!